英语达人,修改文章My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young gi

英语达人,修改文章My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young gi
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My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a scientist in future.However,after years,my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese.It will be so great that I can convey the mother language I am speak and the culture I grow up in.So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
During my study in the college,I make great efforts to learn English and Chinese culture.Although it is very difficult,I never give up my goal.I read a lot of books to get more knowledge.I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language.Now I have made great progress.As long as I focus on your dream and try really hard,I believe it will come true.
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英语达人,修改文章My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams.Some people want to be rich,dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young gi
My Dream
Everyone has dreams.Some people want to be the rich,and dream of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly achieving great reputation.I have a lot of dreams too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a scientist in future.However my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese year by year.It will be so wonderful because I can convey our native language and local culture to the world.Therefore,I studied so hard from middle school to university that I can catch my ideal.
During my life in university,I make great efforts to learn English and Chinese culture.Although the knowledge is very difficult,I never give up my goal.I reading so many books in order to obtain more knowledge.I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language.No pains no gains.I have made great progress at present.As long as I focus on my dream and make continuous efforts,I believe,my dream will come true in the near future.

My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot ...

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My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a scientist. However, my dream is more realistic that I want to help foreigners with their Chinese years later,. It may be so great that I can express parent language.So I will study hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
During my life in university, I may make great efforts to learn English and Chinese culture. Although it is very difficult, I never give up my goal. I read a number of books to be knowledgeable. I take every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language. Now I have made great progress. As long as I focus on your dream and try really hard, I believe it will be come true.

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My Dream
Everyone have different dreams. Some people want to be rich man, such as millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous one, such as suddenly jump to great fame. And I have a lot of dre...

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My Dream
Everyone have different dreams. Some people want to be rich man, such as millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous one, such as suddenly jump to great fame. And I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed I will become a scientist in future. However after years, my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese. It will be great that I can convey the mother language I am speak and the culture I grow up in. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
During my study in the college, I make great efforts to learn English and Chinese. Although it is very difficult, I never give up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language. Now I have made great progress. As long as I focus on your dream and try really hard, I believe it will come true.
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