请英文好的朋友帮助修正一下以下段落写作的错误Both sites contain separate sections introducing environmental protection,and there is a rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’,‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability

请英文好的朋友帮助修正一下以下段落写作的错误Both sites contain separate sections introducing environmental protection,and there is a rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’,‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability
请英文好的朋友帮助修正一下以下段落写作的错误
Both sites contain separate sections introducing environmental protection,and there is a rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’,‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability Scorecard’,etc.and mass of the article which topic is around environment,indicating that the two companies take issues of environmental protection very seriously.

请英文好的朋友帮助修正一下以下段落写作的错误Both sites contain separate sections introducing environmental protection,and there is a rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’,‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability
总的来说,写得还不错.但个别地方用词不当,标点符号用错.
Each (不同的用each; 相同的用both) of the two sites contains separate sections introducing environmental protection,(后面的是两个点“加起来”有的还是各自有的?签于这种模棱两可的情况,我觉得这样写比较妥当),which includes several categories,such as "Sustainable Profitability," "Environment," and "Sustainability Scorecard," etc.and a wealth of articles (article 是可数名词,用mass不对) with the topic centering around environment/articles focusing on the topic of environment.All of these are strong indication/strongly indicate that the two companies takes issues of environmental protection very seriously.

Both sites contain separated sections which introducing environmental protection。There is rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’, ‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability Scorecard’, etc. and m...

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Both sites contain separated sections which introducing environmental protection。There is rich categories such as ‘Sustainable Profitability’, ‘Environment’ and ‘Sustainability Scorecard’, etc. and mass of the article which topic is around environment, indicated that two companies take issues of environmental protection very seriously.语感太差了。很中国化的英语段落。

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