【求助】请分析下这句英文有错吗?请分析下这句英文有错吗?他们用像皮艇蓄积雨水.由于他们随身带了一支捕鱼枪,因此,吃饭不愁.他们天天捕捉龙虾和鱼,正如其中一位所说,吃得“像国王一

【求助】请分析下这句英文有错吗?请分析下这句英文有错吗?他们用像皮艇蓄积雨水.由于他们随身带了一支捕鱼枪,因此,吃饭不愁.他们天天捕捉龙虾和鱼,正如其中一位所说,吃得“像国王一
【求助】请分析下这句英文有错吗?
请分析下这句英文有错吗?
他们用像皮艇蓄积雨水.由于他们随身带了一支捕鱼枪,因此,吃饭不愁.他们天天捕捉龙虾和鱼,正如其中一位所说,吃得“像国王一样好”.5天后,一条油轮从那儿路过,搭救了他们.这二位不得不离开那个荒岛时,还真的感到遗憾呢!
They collected the rainwater with rubber dinghy.They didn’t worry no food for they always took a gun of catch fish.They caught lobsters and fish to eat everyday.Even as one of them said：“they eat as well as king”.Five days later,they were saved by a oil tanker which just passed there.It is so regret that the two men have to leave the wild island.
请分析这句英文有错没,若有,请把错误指出来,并说下怎么改.
（原版翻译我有,但这里不需要,请就这段话分析下,

【求助】请分析下这句英文有错吗?请分析下这句英文有错吗?他们用像皮艇蓄积雨水.由于他们随身带了一支捕鱼枪,因此,吃饭不愁.他们天天捕捉龙虾和鱼,正如其中一位所说,吃得“像国王一
总体上比较中式英语.They collected the rainwater (用rain就好)with (their)rubber dinghy. They didn’t worry (加about)no food for they always took a gun of (改为for catching)catch fish. They caught lobsters and fish to eat everyday. Even as one of them said：“they eat as well as (词组改为like)king”. Five days later, they were saved by a (应是an)oil tanker which just passed there. It is so regret that the two men have to leave t(这句话时态不对,so可以修饰形容词和副词,而不是名词,it was a great regret for them to leave .)

They didn’t worry no food for they always took a gun of catch fish.
They didn’t worry (about) no food for (them) always take a gun of catch(ing) fish.

They didn’t worry（about） no food for(because) they always took a gun of catch(catching) fish. They caught lobsters and fish to eat (for eating)everyday. Even as one of them said：“they eat as well as(t...

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They didn’t worry（about） no food for(because) they always took a gun of catch(catching) fish. They caught lobsters and fish to eat (for eating)everyday. Even as one of them said：“they eat as well as(the) king”. Five days later, they were saved by a oil tanker which just passed there. It is (was)so regret that the two men have(had) to leave the wild island.

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第二句，They didn’t worry about food 这里用about，他们不用担心食物，就可以了，they had a fishing gun.这里took有带走的意味，我觉得用had比较好，用took也可以，在句子后面加个with them会好一点。 像国王一样好。they eat like a king ,就可以表达出意思，as well as a king 也行，你的句子少了个...

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第二句，They didn’t worry about food 这里用about，他们不用担心食物，就可以了，they had a fishing gun.这里took有带走的意味，我觉得用had比较好，用took也可以，在句子后面加个with them会好一点。 像国王一样好。they eat like a king ,就可以表达出意思，as well as a king 也行，你的句子少了个a.下一句an oil ,要用an而不是a.路过，改成passed by.最后一句我不确定。如果是虚拟语气的话就没错，要不是虚拟语气的话，时态不对。

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第二句：they didn't worry about food for/as/because...不担心食物问题，worry about常用搭配
第三句：they went to catch lobsters and fish everyday.每天捕鱼和虾，我认为不用补充目的“吃”只用表达动作
第三句："even"有甚至的含义，一定要用的话可说one of them even ...

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第二句：they didn't worry about food for/as/because...不担心食物问题，worry about常用搭配
第三句：they went to catch lobsters and fish everyday.每天捕鱼和虾，我认为不用补充目的“吃”只用表达动作
第三句："even"有甚至的含义，一定要用的话可说one of them even said that ...
最后一句：both of them really regretted having to leave the desert island.
也可用feel sorry for

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恩 好像没什么错误

They collected the rain with the rubber dinghy.They didn’t need to worry about the food because they had taken a fish- gun with them . They caught lobsters and fish everyday. As one of them said：“th...

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They collected the rain with the rubber dinghy.They didn’t need to worry about the food because they had taken a fish- gun with them . They caught lobsters and fish everyday. As one of them said：“they eat as well as the king”. Five days later, an oil tanker passed there and they were saved.The two man really felt a bitter regret when they had to leave the island at last.

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