初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用关于寒假计划的Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn new things from the books.I think it is the mo

初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用关于寒假计划的Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn new things from the books.I think it is the mo
初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用
关于寒假计划的
Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn new things from the books.I think it is the most important things to learn.And I think have a strong body is as important as we learn.So I'm going to eat an apple a day,because an apple a day keep the doctor away.This is my winter vacation's resolution.That sounds really great.I can't wait it.

初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用关于寒假计划的Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn new things from the books.I think it is the mo
Winter Vacation is coming.
This time I want to do something meaningful.
I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.
Because I want to learn new things from the books.
I think it is the most important thing to learn.
And I think having a strong body is as important as our learning.
So I'm going to eat an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away.
This is my winter vacation's plan.
That sounds really great.I can't wait for it.
呃.以上改正了语法错误.以下润色下表达,以供参考.
Winter Vacation is just around the corner.
This time I want to do something meaningful.
I'm going to spend an hour reading every day because I want to learn new things from the books.
I think learning is such an important thing.
And I also think having a strong body is as important as our learning.
So I'm going to have an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away,as the saying is（就像俗话说的）.
This is my winter vacation's plan.
That sounds so great that I can't wait for it.

And I think having a strong body is as important as we learn
I can't wait for it.

I have already had a general idea about my winter vacation. And this time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour every day doing some extensive reading in order to learn more new...

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I have already had a general idea about my winter vacation. And this time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour every day doing some extensive reading in order to learn more new things from books.Besides,strong body is also an important factor during our study .Since there is a saying that"an apple a day keeps the doctor away",I will follow it .Oh,that sounds too attractive for me to wait anymore.
呵呵~这个应该不像是初二写的吧？
不知道有没有语法错误

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Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn some new things .I think it is the most important thing to le...

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Winter Vacation is coming.This time I want to do something meaningful.I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.Because I want to learn some new things .I think it is the most important thing to learn.And I think Ihaving a strong body is also important .So I'm going to eat an apple a day,because one apple a day keeps the doctor away.These are my winter vacation's plans.That sounds really great.I will try my best to do them .只改了一些表面的问题，文章太chinglish了，不过初二英语，写的不错。

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