请高人帮我看看 英文语法有没有错误In form 2,my school result is not so good too.But,after I had got my study plan,my school result was fast improve.And do your homework per day.It is very important!If you have any question about it,you

请高人帮我看看 英文语法有没有错误In form 2,my school result is not so good too.But,after I had got my study plan,my school result was fast improve.And do your homework per day.It is very important!If you have any question about it,you
请高人帮我看看 英文语法有没有错误
In form 2,my school result is not so good too.But,after I had got my study plan,my school result was fast improve.And do your homework per day.It is very important!If you have any question about it,you should ask your classmates in the same day.And if you have any problems about science and English,you can write me a letter or send e-mail.I will help you to solve.
还有就是
And I made my planning chart.
And I made my plan of study.
这两句,哪句对,哪句比较好.

请高人帮我看看 英文语法有没有错误In form 2,my school result is not so good too.But,after I had got my study plan,my school result was fast improve.And do your homework per day.It is very important!If you have any question about it,you
In form 2, my school result is not so good too.
--->form 2你是指二年级吗?建议改为grade 2
too改为either
school result改为study
But, after I had got my study plan, my school result was fast improve.
--->But后不应有标点；删掉had; fast improve改为fastly improved.

总体上说,chinglish, 基本上按照中文语法和思考方式.

中式英语很严重。要想地道得大改！不止是语法了，有些词也没用对。