写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to
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![写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to](/uploads/image/z/14118823-55-3.jpg?t=%E5%86%99%E4%BA%86%E5%87%A0%E5%8F%A5%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%2C%E5%B8%8C%E6%9C%9B%E5%A4%A7%E5%AE%B6%E7%BB%99%E7%BA%A0%E6%AD%A3%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E5%93%88In+september+2007%2C+i+begin+work+for+a+health+club+as+a+reception%2C+it%27s+about+four+month%3Bnext+year%2Ci%27m+very+glad+to+be+a+assistant+hall+manager+in+icbc.+During+this+time%2Ci+think+wherever+i+have+a+job+to)
写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to
写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈
In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to do.i try to do it to the best of my bility.i enjoy working with others as well as alone.i am a very reliable and conscientious. 语法不是很好,大家给纠个错吧!
写了几句英语,希望大家给纠正一下哈In september 2007, i begin work for a health club as a reception, it's about four month;next year,i'm very glad to be a assistant hall manager in icbc. During this time,i think wherever i have a job to
文章应该用一般过去时,所以begin要改为began.其他动词也要改为过去时.后面begin work 的语法有错,begin后接to do 或doing ,不能直接接动词原形.可以改为began to work.next year 后面讲的是将来的事情要用过去将来时.I try to do it to the best of...这句话应该改为I try to do it the best of .中间没有哪个to.才疏学浅,