新概念英语二册45课It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost如果这句话换成了 It wrapped up in newspaper and it had contained half the money he had lost.这样可不可以呢?课文如下:Three mo

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新概念英语二册45课It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost如果这句话换成了 It wrapped up in newspaper and it had contained half the money he had lost.这样可不可以呢?课文如下:Three mo

新概念英语二册45课It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost如果这句话换成了 It wrapped up in newspaper and it had contained half the money he had lost.这样可不可以呢?课文如下:Three mo
新概念英语二册45课It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost
如果这句话换成了 It wrapped up in newspaper and it had contained half the money he had lost.这样可不可以呢?课文如下:Three months passed,and then one morning,Sam found his wallet outside his front door.It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost,together with a note which said:'A thief,yes,but only 50 per cent a thief!'

新概念英语二册45课It had been wrapped up in newspaper and it contained half the money he had lost如果这句话换成了 It wrapped up in newspaper and it had contained half the money he had lost.这样可不可以呢?课文如下:Three mo
你那个改法不行,主要的问题出在语态,wallet是被包在报纸里面的,因此前面的wrap这个动作得用被动态.
另外一个问题,就是即使你改成了It was wrapped in newspaper and it had contained half the money...我感觉还是没有原句好.主要在于contain那个动作我觉得不需要用过去完成时,强调contain的动作在先,我更感觉那是一种状态,就是Sam发现钱包时钱包的一个状态(装着钱),因此用一般过去式表示与那个时间点同步比较好.至于说前面wrap那里用过去完成还是一般过去,我觉得两者都可以吧.原文用had been wrapped是想强调在被sam发现前钱包被小偷包了起来,我却觉得用一般过去时来表示它被包着这样一个状态也OK.

时态不对

不可以时态不能替换

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